Oh, I really liked this. I hate how fandom likes to characterize Thor as an overgrown puppy or a child or use him for the comic relief when he's, you know, a thousand-year-old warrior prince with an extensive knowledge of the universe. So I enjoyed an intelligent Thor story, but also I like your description of Jane and her cohort, and creating a little family of choice there. Also, I love the idea of Thor slowly discovering the literature of Earth via audiobooks, mostly because I'm thinking of all of the stuff that he gets to experience for the first time.