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It's been six weeks, during which there has been progress, remarkable under the circumstances but not nearly enough.

What came before and the start of the next chapter, ~750 words )


... and then some more outline, from a randomish place late in a 60-pages-and-growing document: further proof of concept )
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I'm thinking I should maybe start tagging this stuff.

Anyway, continues directly from here.

3000 words

Erik felt like they were speaking different languages that coincidentally used the same words. He knew the component elements, but strung together as Xavier had arranged them, they made no sense. )

The outline's at 30k words and 50-something pages. And nowhere near done.
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From pg. 38 of the outline: Charles and Erik )
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The outline is stuck at 17k words, probably around the halfway mark. This? This is the expansion on the first quarter of the first bullet point. And it's 1500 words. And a little rough, but I just wanted to get some words out.

Charles and Erik don't meet cute )
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Charles: "I’ve had nightmares of him catching you, Erik. Of you brought to the Hellfire Club as a prisoner and Shaw giving me the choice of turning you into an obedient servant of the Inner Circle or letting Emma do it. I don’t know if I have the skill for such a delicate task, one to be tried for the first time upon a mind as formidable as yours.

"I don’t know that I could do it well, but I do know that Emma couldn’t do it at all. And then I wake up screaming because my choice is to rip out your soul or let her destroy you entirely and irreparably.

"Please stay where you are, wherever it is that you are, and don’t force that choice upon me."

Erik: "If it should ever come down to that choice, Charles, I ask that you kill me instead."

Charles: "This is you telling me you won’t stay away, isn’t it."

Erik: "No, this is me telling you that it doesn’t matter what I do. There are a hundred ways your nightmare comes to pass. I’d like you to be prepared for all of them."


The outline's at ten thousand words and I'm possibly past the halfway point, but maybe not. The story itself... oh my goodness. And it's entirely [personal profile] seperis's fault. (Not really, I do this to myself, but she's egged me on.)
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1100 words of Erik backstory because I never actually write the story I set out to write.

there are a million ways to handwave and this is mine )
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This is 1250 words of... not sure. More ironing out the practical points of the X-movie, I suppose. Worldbuilding, which is probably my favorite thing to do.

and maybe giving Gabrielle Haller a little less of a creepy relationship with Xavier )
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I haven't written X-fic in years and years. It may be showing.


Recommence
2400 words; genfic
Xavier


The first year is so much a blur, albeit one studded with discrete moments of perfect clarity. )
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Let's just call this another of my ill-conceived Five Things projects. Or 'the crossover from hell.' For my fandom of one, I think. :)

Five times (minus four) Raylan Givens Was Someone Else's Problem

Paradise usually comes with snakes )
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Written as a pinch-hit for [profile] trekreversebang, art forthcoming:

Mobius
11k words; genfic

summary: Christopher Pike and the Kirks have been influencing each other for twenty-five years.

it all cycles back around )
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Three things Ros Myers was surprised by in the Pegasus Galaxy.
2700 words; genfic [Stargate/Spooks]

Life is nasty, hard, brutish, and short. )
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Anne asked for Drs. Clayton or Grebner in "Impetus," which is itself a POV shift on "Object in Motion." I think you can probably read them in whatever order you want.

cast list

The Lorentz Factor
3500 words; genfic


god, Nance, this galaxy is so fucking cruel. )
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Written for [profile] trekreversebang:

Standard Operating Procedures
16K words; genfic; Kirk, Spock, Uhura, Sulu, (and Pike)
With art by [personal profile] ileliberte

Summary: They weren't trouble magnets. It was simply a very strong affinity.

Read more... )
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from here

The Rubik's Cube currently in Lorne's office is the fifth he's owned.

The first one was in his Christmas stocking in 1980. He tried to solve it, but he wasn't very good at it. So he tried to peel the stickers off to cheat, except one of them didn't come off cleanly and it was obvious what he'd done and his sister wouldn't stop making fun of him for it. He ended up taking that one apart, since Jimmy Brennan said you could do that and put it together again, but he couldn't and then his mother vacuumed up a piece and that was that.

The second one was a gift from his sister when she left for college -- hers. He found it in his room, in his desk, with a note warning him not to break this one, too. He kept it -- safe -- through his own departure to college and first two postings once he'd gotten his commission. He returned it to Vicki -- actually, to his six-week-old nephew -- when he was getting PCSed to Korea, with a note saying that he was teaching the baby to peel the stickers off as soon as he was old enough.

The third one was a V-Cube 7 he found on a trip into Osan city. One of those toy shops with rows and rows of brightly-colored plastic gew-gaws opened up next to the Kyochon they always went to and he went in there every time to pick up things to send to his nephew (and then his niece). He thought the V-Cube was a knock-off, which didn't stop him from buying one for himself and one for Vicki, but it was apparently legit. He never tried to solve his, but he made sure to mix up the one he sent to Vicki real good.

The fourth was a regular original flavor, purchased at a Wal-Mart in Colorado Springs because he saw it piled up next to the register with all of the other impulse items and last-minute discards from shopping carts. He'd lost the V-Cube at some point after Korea, or maybe in the move from Korea. He kept this one in his SGC team locker, since Edwards did not approve of such things in professional office space. Once he got to Atlantis, however, it went on his desk as a paperweight because Sheppard was the kind of CO who would absolutely require such things in professional office space -- if it ever dawned on him that he could, in fact, involve himself so deeply in his subordinates' professional lives. But it hasn't dawned on him, so Sheppard comes into Lorne's office, drops into 'his' chair, picks up the Rubik's Cube, and wonders aloud why none of the marine captains have toys in their office he can play with (and did Lorne undo his progress when he wasn't around to see)?

The fifth and current version is also original flavor and also purchased at a Wal-Mart in Colorado Springs. Lorne doesn't know which one or who was sent to buy it, just that it was a combined effort between Sheppard and whichever lieutenant was in charge of logistics when the request was attached to the databurst and Lieutenant Osgeny, who was the logistics officer when it arrived in the Daedalus's hold. Its predecessor was lost in the chaos that had been Atlantis's attack by the Asurans, hyperspace flight, and resettling on another world. Little Tripoli had fared relatively well as a whole, but Lorne's office windows had been open before it all started and, well. Lorne noticed the absence, but he'd been more concerned with what else was missing and had put his energies not spent dealing with the fallout of Elizabeth Weir's not-quite-death and everything that came from that (including Sam Carter's arrival) to worry about it. Sheppard, meanwhile, had other ideas.

"Here," he says as he walks in to Lorne's office, pulling a Rubik's Cube out of his jacket pocket. He puts the toy on one of the (many) stacks of folders and paperwork and mind-boggling other crap Lorne's seeing in his sleep at this point. Sheppard's working his ass off, too, which is why Lorne doesn't do more than look up and blink, unable to process the jump required to get from what he's reading to what Sheppard is saying. "Now we can say things are back to normal."

It's a lie, of course. Things won't be anything close to normal for a while, won't be as they were ever again. But it's one of those lies they have to tell each other because they're the ones who have to pretend that they will be as they were, better even. From them, all else in Little Tripoli, and to an extent Atlantis as a whole, especially with Weir missing, follows.

Lorne's smile is genuine. "So we can."
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from/for here: Ros Myers, SGC.

She carries the assimilated rank of lieutenant colonel. She's a little unclear if there's any official mechanism for this or if it's just O'Neill making things up as he goes along again, especially as neither Jackson nor Teal'c carry any sort of warrant or rank. But within the Stargate Program it doesn't really matter as O'Neill's word is effectively law.

Back at the Mountain, it meant that the bevy of majors did what she told them to without questioning and, now that they are finally leaving for Atlantis, she finds herself expecting that Major Sheppard will do the same. He was pliant enough in the mobilization period, unwilling to put himself under the authority of Sumner and therefore keeping himself just out from underfoot of Weir, who dotes on him like a favored child.

Elizabeth Weir had a very good career in the diplomatic corps, everyone says. Often. Ros, with her own prior career that frequently meant undoing the messes the US State Department created in the world, takes that to be a backhanded assessment of Weir's brief time as the SGC's chief and nothing in her personal interactions with the woman has changed that. Weir is pleasant, eager, and, for a woman who spent a year authorizing off-world missions and essentially prosecuting a secret war with the Goa'uld, shockingly optimistic about what awaits them in Pegasus.

O'Neill sighed when Ros told him that while she understood that he wanted her along to provide competent leadership for investigation of the Pegasus galaxy, there was bloody little she could get done if they were led by a woman who expected to be greeted by the indigenous populations with leis and boxes of sweets. He assured her that Weir was far more competent and realistic than she looked and, besides, with Sumner bitching about the same things, Ros would have an ally.

"It's a wonder you two don't get along better," O'Neill told her. "You certainly sound exactly alike."

Except she doesn't have an ally, because one of the first things she has to do in Pegasus is kill Sumner. Which is ironic and terrible and, apart from the tragedy of it, leaves the marine contingent without a leader, a headless body of a not-very-bright creature. Ford is useless -- worse than useless; Ros has tried not to deal with him directly, afraid of those pitiful eyes full of unshed tears.

(Making Ford cry the first time had been an accident and, as it happened in Antarctica before either of them had been assigned to the Atlantis mission, without meaningful consequence. The second time, however, brought her a meeting with O'Neill, one of those meetings where he gets actually annoyed because he feels your behavior is not only counterproductive, but giving him more to do. Ros apologized, which made her a little relieved that the third time came in another galaxy and far from the General's disappointed gaze.)

Weir understands that Ford cannot assume command of the military element in Atlantis; it is not even discussed. Ros expects Weir will suggest Sheppard, which is slightly less ridiculous but not by much, and Ros expects to counter by suggesting herself. She led teams of airmen at the Mountain and Weir herself headed up a military program. It would not be that much of a precedent to set and, here in a new galaxy, there is no reason to adhere to rules that only made sense in the old one.

Weir does propose Sheppard, but she does so by giving Ros his service jacket to read.

"Where is this man?" Ros asks her, gesturing to the laptop screen once she is finished reading. "He never arrived at the Mountain."

Weir smiles at her, catlike. "In the aircraft bay, I believe."

Ros goes to find him there, expecting to find the lazy, slouching man she got used to slinking around the halls of the SGC. She does not find him. Major Sheppard is there, slouching against the side of one of the spacecraft as an excited Spanish engineer prattles on in heavily-accented english, but he carries none of the "none of this concerns me at all" insouciance she'd learned to recognize from afar like a bad body odor.

"Miz Myers," he drawls when he sees her, just enough of an emphasis on the honorific to let her know that yes, the rules have changed. She knows Weir hasn't said anything to him yet about assuming command of the marines, but it's clear he's taking that as his prerogative.

"Major," she replies in kind, accepting the challenge. She has no plans to change her routine of expecting obedience out of the Stargate Program's bevy of O-4s; Sheppard may have to be handled differently, but handled he will be.


( comment on LJ?)
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(just testing to see if I can post to DW from Semagic per these instructions)
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A post, just so that the page stops saying that there is an error. There is no error.

This is a space undefined.

Every once in a while, I ponder splitting my LJ between the fic and fandom stuff and the non-fic, say by creating a fic-only journal. Save those who are revolted by my politics/other views from being exposed to them since, lord knows, I'd like some actors and singers (and fandom people) better if I didn't know the details of their innermost thoughts. But I never have created a fic-only journal, since I really haven't used my LJ for non-fannish things. For the same reason, I've never gotten a back-up journal at any of the LJ clones.

But now I have this space and I must choose whether it is a vacuum that cannot remain empty or to use it as a resource other than what it is meant for (i.e., a journaling service with no journal). Decisions....
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